baseball, poetry, and kim chi

Thursday, January 25, 2007

H_ngm_n


has poems from my newest series in it

1 Comments:

Blogger postpran said...

Love this series Jim. Esp. like "I am in love" and "I hope I do not die here." The line breaks and spacial poetics make those lines work. If they were written as horizontal left to right margin sentence it would lose all emotional impact for me. I mean those lines move out of sentimentality for me because of the line breaks and spacing.

Your explorations in spacial poetics are dead-on fascinating!

It's the same for a lot of poems in Robert Creeley's last book Life & Death. I mean the linebreaks create the emotion or carry it or move it away
from sentimentality.

Have u read it?

Can't wait to read more from 33 times.

Love it love it love

it

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