baseball, poetry, and kim chi

Sunday, March 04, 2007

Check the new word for / word.

I got a few poems floating around in there.

Don't know if there is a cleaner looking page out there than what Minton puts together. There are things I need to learn.

3 Comments:

Blogger johnsu01 said...

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12:00 PM

 
Blogger Matthew Henriksen said...

The poem is more about the letters than the space they leave.

12:00 AM

 
Blogger JWG said...

Hi Matt,

Not sure which poem you are talking about. The general poem. My poem.

Yes. I want the words to do things in themselves. But before I had always kept the poem together and kept it on the left margin. Would that first poem work if it stayed on the left margin and did not break all over the page? I don't think it would. I think the breaks add rhythm, a kind of eye time, it takes the eye time to move and that move creates the pace.

Nothing new here. Think plenty of Pos are doing it. Just trying to figure it out. Don't you have anything better to do than look at this dieing blog?

12:45 AM

 

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